Am trying to write a <1000 word essay that would function as an introduction to Dialectical Naturalism, using the Feynman Technique to attempt to simplify it as much as possible, cutting out all the jargon.

Would anybody be interested in viewing my first draft, and giving me pointers on where I've gone too complicated, or things that need more explanation?


@GreenandBlack not sure how much I could help but I’d love to have a look please :)

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